Grief

Matthew Winslow

Mar 3, 2023

8

The filming was done very well, only thing I would have wanted more of was about more emotion to dialogue of narrator. I was close to feeling it just watching needed that second sense to hear hear it. I would definitely like to see this extended into a longer short or feature. I think you have a great foundation to build on. Build in the story of who she lost, so many how's to mention, time they were together, how they met, how he passed, how's she is coping in life, work etc. I say keep going!